Photoshop Feedback :)

jonny123

Bright Spark
Hey guys just found this part of the forums and thought i would post some of my recent work on here to see if any of you guys have got any feedback,If i get good feedback i will go back and re-edit them to make them better :)
For some reason the files would not upload directly to this site so ive screenshoted them with gyazo and uploaded them.
http://gyazo.com/4796f5062928ffca76893685ababb9b7
http://gyazo.com/2d70971ee80eb388d98b0d721e6db4be
http://gyazo.com/3e818932a3f2a5212b8e50bbf1e63ff7

With the tinie tempah pciture i was wondering if anyone has ideas for the left hand side (Where the big picture of tinie tempah is )Because the rest of the peace looks kinda clean then thats the complete opposite but couldent think of anything to put there :S

Any help or feedback is much appriceated :)
 

Corfate

Author Level
You could maybe put some form of graffiti there? Might fit in with the whole 'rap' scene, or whatever he does :p

I love the assassins creed one, i'd be tempted to put it as my background, but im kind of glued to my current one...

Desktop.png
 

JohnMalcolm1970

Active member
In the first one, the composition looks a little awkward. The block of text on the right is too close to the three photograph like images in the middle. Another thing I noticed was that there seems to be some kind of shadowing on the rightmost photo of the three, you might be better just applying the same drop shadow layer effect to all three to keep them consistent. Lastly, and these are just my personal preferences, I'd prefer the background to be darker to allow the effect around the figure to be more punchy and glowing and to add some contrast. Lightening the block of text a tad would also make it more readable
 
Last edited:

jonny123

Bright Spark
In the first one, the composition looks a little awkward. The block of test on the right is too close to the three photograph like images in the middle. Another thing I noticed was that there seems to be some kind of shadowing on the rightmost photo of the three, you might be better just applying the same drop shadow layer effect to all three to keep them consistent. Lastly, and these are just my personal preferences, I'd prefer the background to be darker to allow the effect around the figure to be more punchy and glowing and to add some contrast. Lightening the block of text a tad would also make it more readable
Thanks man as soon as i get time ill have a look at re-editing them thanks :)
 
Top